Female, 18: This doesnt seem to fit in with the rest of the magazine, the text is too close to both edges & there are no page numbers. However I do like the pictures used and the interview itself is very interesting.
Male, 25: I'm not overally keen on the background, I feel like their is so much more you could do with this.
Due to this feedback I am currently working on my new DPS.
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